My Achievement and Failure in Elementary School

        Everyone certainly has an achievement and failure. Of achievement a person learns to always be the best. Of the failure a person is always learning to be better. As well as with me. I will share a few stories about the achievement and failure when I was in Elementar School. When I was in Elementary School I am included good student in class. Because almost every semester (quarterly) I got a rank between one two and three, but it happened when I was in grades three until six. In class one and two I only got rank between three until eight. At that I never thought I could got rank one. Starting from that moment I often got rank one. Of course, it is not easy to got rangked first, because I must to figth  hard, study hard and I also compete with my classmates who named Pipin Lestari and Agung Handoko. They are Including good student in class. Especially Agung Handoko he is male students are very cleaver. Because the results of my hard work I can be like they are  always were rated. Although, sometimes it was ranked among the three of  us took turns. But we always became good friends. At the time I remeber when I rose to fifth grade I was appointed to follow a race which quiz competitions and I was appointed to represent the quiz competitions Natural Science subject. I became keen learn and be guided by a mentor teacher Natural Science. So can win the race to the provincial level. At the home I also continue to practice and learn until the day of the race arrived. The first day of competitions was held at the village. At the time the race went smoothly and  I was able to get through it well. After  two days of competitions held at the village level. supervising teacher of Natural Science lesson tells me that I qualified for the district level do not think became with it. Even then be very pleasent news at that time. But when the race was held district level I did not manage to win the race I just got 2 champion. Because my oppenet is much more cleaver and lucky. I became lost and can only last up to district level. That's my failure when I follow the quiz competitions despite failing but still be an honor because I can follow the race and managed to get two champion. I kept trying to study hard in order to become even more and may have the opportunity to be a winner. To be achieving students that requires passion and hard work for the objectives to be achieved with either. If we fail do not despair keep trying to be able to achieve a success.

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Title	My Achievement and Failure in Elementary School
Introductory Paragraph	Everyone certainly has an achievement and failure. Of achievement a person learns to always be the best. Of the failure a person is always learning to be better. As well as with me. I will share a few stories about the achievement and failure when I was in Elementar School.
Orientation	When I was in Elementary School I am included good student in class. Because almost every semester (quarterly) I got a rank between one two and three, but it happened when I was in grades three until six. In class one and two I only got rank between three until eight. At that I never thought Icould got rank one. Starting from that moment I often got rank one.
Complication	Of course, it is not easy to got rangked first, because I must to figth  hard, study hard and I also compete with my classmates who named Pipin Lestari and Agung Handoko. They are Including good student in class. Especially Agung Handoko he is male students are very cleaver. Because the results of my hard work I can be like they are  always were rated. Although, sometimes it was ranked among the three of  us took turns. But we always became good friends. At the time I remeber when I rose to fifth grade I was appointed to follow a race which quiz competitions and I was appointed to represent the quiz competitions Natural Science subject. I became keen learn and be guided by a mentor teacher Natural Science. So can win the race to the provincial level. At the home I also continue to practice and learn until the day of the race arrived. The first day of competitions was held at the village level. At the time the race went smoothly and  I was able to get through it well. After  two days of competitions held at the village level. supervising teacher of Natural Science lesson tells me that I qualified for the district level do not think became with it. Even then be very pleasent news at that time. But when the race was held district level I did not manage to win the race I just got 2 champion. Because my oppenet is much more cleaver and lucky. I became lost and can only last up to district level. That's my failure when I follow the quiz competitions despite failing but still be an honor because I can follow the race and managed to get two champion.
Resolution	I kept trying to study hard in order to become even more and may have the opportunity to be a winner.
Conclusion (Coda)	To be achieving students that requires passion and hard work for the objectives to be achieved with either. If we fail do not despair keep trying to be able to achieve a success.

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Purple Colour : Introduction
Red Colour : Plot
blue Coluor : Character
Pink Colour : Setting (place and time)
Maroon colour : Climax there in the complication
Topic Sentence :When I was in Elementary School I included good student
The purpose my writing is to tell the readers about my story about my achievement and failure when I was in Elementary School.