ADEQUATE AND INADEQUATE COHESION

1.  Give description how to write paragraph with adequate and in adequate cohesion ?

Cohesion is the glue that hold a piece of writing together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it sticks together from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph. Cohesive device certainly include  transitional words and phrases. Before we to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion we must know about the repetition of key word and use of reference words. After that you should write paragraph relevance and order in your writing. And Idea or topic will be clearly and we must understanding about grammatical of writing.

2. Tell more about cohesion

Cohesion is refers to connectivity in a text.  Cohesion can be though of as all the grammatical and lexical links that link one part of a discourse to another. You might think of cohesion as a means of establising connections within a discourse at all sorts of different levels, e.g., section, paragraph, sentences and even phrases. They are two main types of cohesion grammatical cohesion which is based on structural content, and lexical cohesion which is based on lexical content and background knowledge. A cohesive text created in many different ways. In cohesion in English, M.A.K Halliday indeitify five general categories of cohesive devices that create coherence in text : reference, ellipsis, subtituation, lexical cohesion and conjunction.

3. Different between cohesion and coherence

Different  Between Cohesion And Coherence
Cohesion	Coherence
1.   Cohesion as rather more mechanical links at a language level. 2.   Cohesion is the glue that hold a piece of writing together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it sticks together from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph. Cohesive  device certainly include  transitional words and phrases. 3.    Repetition of key words and use of reference words. 4.    Cohesion refer to connectivity in a text.	1.   Coherence as the discourse making sense as a whole at an ideas level. 2.   When senteces, ideas, and details fit together clearly, listeners/readers can follow along easly and the writing is coherent. The ideas tie together smootly and clearly. 3.   Repetition of a key term or phrase. 4.   Coherence refer to how easy it is to understand the writing.

 

4. Show which text or sentence that shows adequate and inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.

Tittle	About Me
Introducing	Well guys I would like to describe my self and all about me. I will write about my idetity, my appereance, my hobby and reason why I interested with my hobby
Identification	My name is Novia Ratna Sari. I was born on 07 November 1994.  I having two parent who are really cared for me, an older brother who was very understanding and also  have a partner in every sense, but sometimes make me angry.
Description	I am pretty average in size, and incredibly skinny. I have brown eyes, brown skin and long black hair. I am one hundred forty three centimeters. Still growing, probably up  one hundred forty five. Not sure yet. The positive characters I possess and been inherited to my family members are being god-fearing and copassionate but opposite of it I acquire some negative attitudes. But I am still including both children well. I look like a senior high school because many people say like that, moreover my face still looks young and the small size of my body. I live in Mesuji but, now I stay in Bording House at Banjar Rejo 38 B. The best thing of me is I am a very humble, faithful and kind person. as loyal to friends and lover. I can say that I am kind and understanding person because I always help my friends if they have problems. My hobby are shopping, watcing movie, and listening music. I like shopping because I can buy something that I want, to look around the interesting objects such as clothes, bags, shoes etc. Usually shopping can also eliminate boredom. I hobby to watching  animes well as Korean novellas, action, and horror movie because that it can be intersted and entertain me. But, I more  favor watching foreign movies than locals. If I have free time usually I use to  watching television or go out from my bording house and hanging out with my friends, but sometimes I just sleep in my lovely bedroom because nothing I can do than sleep.
Concluding	Thats describtion about myself. I am Novia Ratna Sari. I was born on Wirabangun. I am iclude humble, kind and loyal person. I have some hobby like shopping, watching movie and listening music.

5. You should explain why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion!

1. the red colour sentence categorized into cohesion because there is conjunction "and" in the sentence.

2. the pink colour sentence categorized into cohesion because there is pronoun of the sentence "that"

3. the blue colour sentence categorized into cohesion because in the sentence the main content is clear and relevance.