Cohesion is the glue that hold a piece of
writing together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it sticks together
from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph. Cohesive device certainly include transitional words and phrases. Before we to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion we must know about the repetition of key word and use of reference words. After that you should write paragraph relevance and order in your writing. And Idea or topic will be clearly and we must understanding about grammatical of writing.
2. Tell more about cohesion
Cohesion is
refers to connectivity in a text. Cohesion
can be though of as all the grammatical and lexical links that link one part of
a discourse to another. You might think of cohesion as a means of establising
connections within a discourse at all sorts of different levels, e.g., section,
paragraph, sentences and even phrases. They are two main types of cohesion grammatical cohesion
which is based on structural content, and lexical cohesion which is based on
lexical content and background knowledge. A cohesive text created in many
different ways. In cohesion in English, M.A.K Halliday indeitify five general
categories of cohesive devices that create coherence in text : reference,
ellipsis, subtituation, lexical cohesion and conjunction.
3. Different between cohesion and coherence
Different Between Cohesion And Coherence
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Cohesion
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Coherence
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1. Cohesion as rather more mechanical links at a
language level.
2. Cohesion is the glue that hold a piece of
writing together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it sticks together
from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph. Cohesive device certainly include transitional words and phrases.
3.
Repetition of key words and use of reference
words.
4.
Cohesion refer to connectivity in a text.
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1. Coherence as the discourse making sense as a
whole at an ideas level.
2. When senteces, ideas, and details fit together
clearly, listeners/readers can follow along easly and the writing is
coherent. The ideas tie together smootly and clearly.
3. Repetition of a key term or phrase.
4. Coherence refer to how easy it is to
understand the writing.
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4. Show which text or sentence that shows adequate and inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.
Tittle
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About Me
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Introducing
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Well guys I would like to describe my self and all about me. I will
write about my idetity, my appereance, my hobby and reason why I interested
with my hobby
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Identification
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My name is Novia Ratna Sari. I was born on 07
November 1994. I having two parent who
are really cared for me, an older brother who was very understanding and
also have a partner in every sense,
but sometimes make me angry.
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Description
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I am pretty average in size, and incredibly
skinny. I have brown eyes, brown skin and long black hair. I am
one hundred forty three centimeters. Still growing, probably up one hundred forty five. Not sure yet. The
positive characters I possess and been inherited to my family members are
being god-fearing and copassionate but opposite of it I acquire some negative
attitudes. But I am still including both children well. I look like a senior
high school because many people say like that, moreover my face still looks
young and the small size of my body. I live in Mesuji but, now I stay in
Bording House at Banjar Rejo 38 B. The best thing of me is I am a very
humble, faithful and kind person. as loyal to friends and lover. I can say
that I am kind and understanding person because I always help my friends if
they have problems. My hobby are shopping, watcing movie, and listening
music. I like shopping because I can buy something that I want, to look
around the interesting objects such as clothes, bags, shoes etc. Usually
shopping can also eliminate boredom. I hobby to watching animes well as Korean novellas, action, and
horror movie because that it can be intersted and entertain me. But, I
more favor watching foreign movies
than locals. If I have free time usually I use to watching television or go out from my
bording house and hanging out with my friends, but sometimes I just sleep in
my lovely bedroom because nothing I can do than sleep.
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Concluding
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Thats describtion about myself. I am Novia Ratna Sari. I was born on
Wirabangun. I am iclude humble, kind and loyal person. I have some hobby like
shopping, watching movie and listening music.
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5. You should explain why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion!
1. the red colour sentence categorized into cohesion because there is conjunction "and" in the sentence.
2. the pink colour sentence categorized into cohesion because there is pronoun of the sentence "that"
3. the blue colour sentence categorized into cohesion because in the sentence the main content is clear and relevance.
